I can reorganize your document so that the argument flows from topic to topic smoothly and convincingly. I can also suggest ways to strengthen your document with additional information and argumentation.
I will mark up the document with my suggestions and return it to you with a written explanation. We can then discuss my suggestions further by email or on the phone.
Here are some examples of my Structural Editing:
- A Nation’s Economic Catalyst
- An Experiment in Bottom-Up Systemic Change
- Une expérience de changement systémique à partir de la base
- The Potluck Café
- What Value Social Enterprise?
- Qu'est-ce qui fait la valeur de l'entreprise sociale ?
- Canada’s Conscious Consumers
- Les consommateurs canadiens consciencieux
- What is it about Sangudo?
(These documents are available courtesy of the Canadian Centre for Community Renewal.)